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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.


It is not uncommon that obesity has become one of the most serious hidden health issue in our society. Before we discuss the cause of this problem, some causes must be taken out.

As a matter of fact, one significant cause of the problem is, however, that people are less willing to exercise and becoming lazier. Moreover, people are addicted to junk food gradually, such as, french fries, hamburger and coke. Not to mention they don't have time to enjoy a decent healthy meal during weekday. In addition, nowadays it is really hard for people to sleep regularly. However, a good sleep promises a good digestion, which we often ignore the importance of it. Therefore, people are gaining weight due to over intake of food, less training and bad sleep, which cause their worse fitness.

In order to tackle the status quo, we should alarm the public of how dangerous it will be to our physical body if we keep unhealthy life style. Specifically, people who are over weighted were supposed to do exercise regularly. For instance, running five kilometres slowly every two days so that they can keep loosing surplus calories. Furthermore, a healthy diet everyday is a must for all people, staying away from fast food such as Mcdonald's or KFC. Another suggestion is that people are well adviced to have a good sleep which not less than eight hours a day. Having followed the above suggestion, obese people can rebuilt their body and enjoy a healthy life.

All in all, there are three main causes of the increase of obesity and decrease of fitness in several countries. Only if we raise the attention of changing our modes of training, diet and sleep, can we solve the problem in the future.

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