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发表于 2015-4-29 11:14 |显示全部楼层
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Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development. Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.

A robot is a mechanical or virtual artificial agent which can own the sense of intelligence. Some people believe that the robots are the progress of the human society, while others don’t support this technology.To my way of thinking, the development of robots is an inevitable trend, and by reasonable utilization, they can serve as good assistants for the mankind.

The fundamental reason why so many scientists are passionate about the research and application of the robots, is that the robots can replace humans in the assistance of performing many works. It is the fact that some jobs are involved with an amount of repetitive but indispensable works, such as cashier and cleaner. If the robots take on these works, people can pursue for more interesting and more challenging career without affecting the normal operation of the society. In addition, by being equipped with more advanced materials and more complicated algorithms, the robots undertake tasks in extreme/harsh environments such as outer space or the deep sea where people cannot survive. This is especially meaningful for the research work.

Whereas with above benefits, there are concerns about the increasing use of robots and their role in society. The opposing voice from low-level employees is particular big. Their non-technical works are easily completed by the robots whose labor are much cheaper than them, so they have already predicted their miserable future being forced to be unemployed. Besides, considering the intelligence of the robots, they are identified as one threat to the human's dominance. That is to say, the human's society is likely to be governed by these smart robots in the future.

I believe that it is insensible to condemn one technology, since the original intention of developing robots is to facilitate the social development, and improve life quality. As for whether or not they are dangerous, the role of the robots largely depends on their users. In fact, any technology including the robots will exert bad influences if people don’t reasonably utilize it. Besides, I think there is no necessity to fear that the intelligence of robots will exceed that of mankind one day, since they are invented and controlled by people.

In conclusion, the robots are inherently harmless, and they can play an important part in liberating the workforce, facilitating meaningful research works. The negative effects cannot be down to robots themselves but the utilization.



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