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The speaker asserted that people who live in smallvillages are more content with their life that those living in cities. Althoughthe amount of people living in cities occupied a large proportion ofpopulation, it does not mean that people really aspire to live in cities. Thereis a large amount of literature works that convey the desire of people who livein cities and want to move back to the countryside. Therefore, I fundamentallyagree with the statement.
Admittedly, the most remarkable advantage living incities is that people can enjoy all-sided and convenient facilities. Forinstance, if people live in a city, there are several supermarkets surroundingtheir dwellings, so they can buy daily necessities when they go to work or goback home. However, people living in the small villages cannot possess suchconvenience, on the ground that there is small number of supermarkets and thesupermarkets may be far away from where they live, so they have to drive to thesupermarkets on weekends.
Nevertheless, living in small villages, people willnot generate the loneliness because of the frequent contact with neighbors andrelatives. For instance, people who live in the same village are usuallyfamiliar with each other, and with the environment in which they lived, sopeople will have a sense of security. To the contrary, people living in a bigcity seldom have some contact with their neighbors, and they live far away fromtheir relatives. Meeting the strangers and missing family members will causethe helplessness and loneliness. Consequently, people living in small villageswill not feel lonely as what people who live in big cities feel.
Furthermore, the pressure both physically and mentallyof people living in small villages is relatively less than that of peopleliving in cities. There was an investigation worked out few years ago, whichinterviewed six thousand people from different levels in big cities and sixthousand people from villages and the countryside about their index of happinessand pressure. The outcome is that most of people living in villages andcountryside felt happier than people in cities, and people in cities got morepressure than those who lived in villages. The pressure may come from the busy,high price, and fierce competitions.
In conclusion, the villages is appropriate for peopleto live and can adjust the pace of life. During the holidays, it is wise andagreeable way to live in villages for several days.

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People living in small villages are more satisfied with their life than those who live in cities
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