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Today, the qualities of life of people in big cities are worse. What are the causes of this problem? Any measures should be taken to solve it?
Nowadays, people who live in the giant cities have a declined trend in life qualities. Some reasons have attributed to this serious problem and several solutions have to be taken to alleviate this issue.
It is apparent that the explosion of the citizens can lead to the decline of the life qualities. With more and more people immigrate to the urban areas, these rising citizens means more demand for the public facilities which leads to the crowed locations and traffic congestion. Also, excessive consumption stimulate the growth of the prices in the big cities, so human’s life expenses increase quickly.  
In addition, fast-paced life styles aggravate the worse quality. Under the competitive environment, people have to spend more time on work and study. As a consequence, the time can be spent on entertainment and leisure become less and less, especially for the officers and managers. So, they may face the pressure and health problems. All these factors are not beneficial to the promotion of the life qualities.
Obviously, some corresponding ways can be utilized to raise the level of cities life. First of all, government can transfer some working positions and organizations to the suburb areas. So, the majority of the immigration can be attracted to these places which means the density of the big cities can decrease. As a result, the companied issues, like, pollution and congestion can be weaken. Also, employee should learn how to balance the time between work and rest. They should pay more attention on enjoying lives, family and relax.
In conclusion, poor life standards in large cities is an inevitable consequence of the increase of population and fast-paced lives. However, several effective ways can be utilized to overcome this problem.

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