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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their filed of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.       As our society developed, the competition between people and people increasingly a lot. People incline to gain more knowledge to improve their competitive capabilities. There is no denying the fact that whether university students should take history classes or not no matter which major they are in is a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long period of time for it affects peoples well-being. For most of people learning another course means more pressure and money. However, as it for me, taking history course is really a necessary thing not only improving our culture quality but also enrich our knowledge。

  Firstly, taking history classes can enrich our knowledge and expand our horizon. History is a possession which people can judge itself. Through history people can gain some experience about the solution of problems. Take a ancient book master Suns art of war for example, it is a book which can shows people how to win a battle, there is a famous strategy in the book retreat in order to advance. Moreover some of the strategies which no longer be used just in the war, they also can be used in the marketing area or managing area. During the history class we can learn more ancient affairs meanwhile gain more strategies, which can help us solving daily problems. On the contrary, without the history courses people have few opportunity to get in touch with those event, not even mansion about gaining benefit for it.
  Secondly, having history courses can help us make more friends. As we reading more history books, when we talk to others we can speak the historic event correctly and fluently, according to this we can not only gain others praise but also win others respect. Nobody wants to be friend with those person who have narrow horizon. Take my friend Jason for example, he used to be a person who read few books and spent all his spare time on playing computer games. In this situation, he had no friend in reality and did not pay much attention on his homework. His mother was so disappointed him. So she gave him a book, whose name is History As A Mirror and hoped he could gain some benefit from it. Through reading the book he fall in love with those historic stories meanwhile could not help to read more. Now he has a group of friends who have the same interest with him.

As a coin has two sides, there is also some disadvantage of learning history class. For some person whose energy is limited, learning more courses mean have no enough time for their main course and they may failed the exam or can not graduation. However, as people have infinite potential, people can overcome all the hard time through hard-working. Meanwhile if a person how truly fall in love with history, he will treat history as a relaxation but not a duty.
  As what we have discussed above we can safely come to the conclusion, learning history class bring nothing but advantages. People can enrich their knowledge and make more friends. Although sometimes people have to spend much more time, nothing can gain without the payment.

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