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Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on points made in the reading.
The reading passage introduces Ethanol fuel as a bad alternative to gasoline with three reasons to support itself. However, the professor argues that ethanol fuel actually will be a good replacement for gasoline.
First, the reading passage alleges that the using ethanol more will not provide solution to global warming becausing it also emits carbon dioxide, a greenhouse gas, in the process of combustion. On the contrary, the professor explains that the growing process of corn, which ethanol fuel is made from, absords carbon dioxide to an amont that it can offset the amont ethanol fuel emits into the atmosphere. Thus, ethanol fuel will not add carbon dioxide to worsen the global warming.
Second, the reading passage expresses its concern that the production of ethanol fuel will decrease the available amont of corns for animals. In contrast, the professor points out that the production of ethanol fuel uses only the cell wall which is a part that animals don\'t eat. Therefore, the substantial use of ethanol fuel can never reduce available food for animal.
Third, the reading passage believes that once the government eliminate its tax subsidies for ethanol fuel production, the price of ethanol fuel will increase dramatically and won\'t be competitive compared with gasoline. However, the professor assures that with more people buying ethanol fuel, more producer will join the production of the ethanol fuel and thus reduce the price of ethanol fuel. He estimates that future production will be three times greater and consequently the price will decrease by 40%.



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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally speaking, I don\'t think teachers should make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Even though they are free to hold whatever social or potitical views they may have, they need to be careful not to influence students greatly with their personal views.
Some might say that it is good for teachers to provide different perspectives for students and that students will have their own judgement. Well, I seriously doubt that. How can a nine-year-old kid have already developed his own judgement on political and social matters? We are talking about students at all levels. Surely university students are mature enough to have their own opinions and it certainly is helpful for them to look at professors\' points of view regarding the same matters. However, adolescents are so easy to be influenced. Their teachers\' personal opinions may be picked up by them,especially when they may admire their teachers and consider them as role model. That is not the primitive purpose of education. The prime objective of education is to help students to develop their own judgements and their own opinions. Therefore, in order to help students to form their own abilities, teachers can\'t make their social or political views known to students.
Keeping teachers\' social or political views also makes sure that students won\'t be harmed by some extreme personal views held by some teachers. I am only referring to some special cases, not criticizing teachers in general. Although we do believe that teachers are well-trained and responsible for their statement, we can\'t be a hundred percent sure that each one of the teachers hold reasonable viewpoints. In some extreme cases, a teacher may think that certain Party who rules the country is not qualified and doing a bad job in managing the country properly. Corruption and inbalanced distribution within the country are severe. The teacher may think the Party\'s incompetence is to blame. In fact, we can\'t tell whether the teacher is true or not. There might be other factors that cause this kind of issues. I wouldn\'t think the education is successful if his students simply pick up his opinions and generate negative attitude towards the Party. In addition, even if teachers do not hold extreme views, you have to admit that teachers\' personal views are formed from their own experiences and thus possess strong emotions and may be biased. Not a single teacher can be neutral about social and political issues. That\'s why I don\'t think revealing teachers\' veiws to students is not a good idea.
In conclusion, it\'s teachers\' job to guide students to form their own opinions and their abilities to judge and teachers shouldn\'t interfere with that process by providing their personal views to students.



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