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[活动公告] How to write a thesis statement? -----part 1

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发表于 2015-5-26 16:23 |显示全部楼层
相信很多同学写议论文的开头都很头疼吧,小站名师在作文批改中发现了这个通病,很多学生的开头写的不是太主观就是用词不够准确,达意不到位,现在小站名师就拿“how to write a thesis statement"为话题,从两个角度来指导大家如何写你文章的statement,第一期的内容是thesis statement包涵的关键要素
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From my perspectives, a good thesis statement is ofcomplex features. Before we get down to those abstract features, let’s gothrough some topics to help you to understand what a good thesis statement isand to tell a good statement from a bad one.
Theme #1 (agree or disagree?)
Creative artists should always be given the freedom toexpress their own ideas in whichever way the wish. There should be no government restrictions onwhat they do.
Unqualifiedstatement:
I don’t think creative artist should alwayshave freedom to say whatever they want to say, their behaviors must becontrolled.
Samplestatement:
  Inthe modern society, creative ideas and thoughts from artists are more endorsedby the public than before. Although it’s a seemingly positive trend that itsomewhat triggered people’s aspiration and awareness of many aspects of lives,relevant regulations and restrictions should be still put on such approach.
Whyit’s good?
l  Neutralstandpoint
More endorsed by…, although…
l  Contextwithin
In the modern society…
l  Criticalthinking
Think from both sides
l  Non-subjective
Restrictions should be still put on ….
Theme #2(agreeor disagree?)
     It is not necessary to travel to otherplaces to learn about the other culture. We can learn as much as from books,films and internet. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Unqualifiedstatement:
From my point of view, internet is all that we need tolearn a different culture. We don’t necessarily need to go to another countryor go for oversea study.
Samplestatement:
Over the years, with the development ofmodern mass media, some people reckon that it’s no longer necessary to travelto others places. Merely a few mouse clicks and film scenarios, the world ispresented in front of us. However, it’s still widely accepted that the bestaccess to learning a distinct culture is to pay the place a real visit.
Whyit’s good?
l  Neutralstandpoint
Some people reckon…merely….
l  Contextwithin
The development of modern mass media
l  Criticalthinking
However..
l  Non-subjective
It’s still widelyaccepted that….
Exercise:
Try yourselves thefollowing topics with all the good features mentioned above

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How to write a thesis statement? -----part 2
How to write a thesis statement? ----part 3

How to write a thesis statement? ----part 4
【NEW!]How to write a thesis statement? -----part 5


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B老师的原创资料经常是以系列形式的,这次是教我们写议论文,不知道还会出几个PART,期待耶!!!!

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bastiaanwu  现在目前说了开头怎么写,概括,每段的开头,和头南风暴,接下来还会说一说辩证思维和观点衍生吧  详情 回复 发表于 2015-5-28 11:28
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B老师的原创资料经常是以系列形式的,这次是教我们写议论文,不知道还会出几个PART,期待耶!!!! ...

现在目前说了开头怎么写,概括,每段的开头,和头南风暴,接下来还会说一说辩证思维和观点衍生吧
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