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[老师已改] 雅思写作——[A类][Task 1][剑9Test1]第十篇修改版

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The two layouts compare the geographicalfeatures of a particular island before and after certain tourist buildings areconstructed.

Before the construction, a huge island with abeach in the west could be seen. There were merely some trees growing in thewestern part and the eastern part of the main island. Moreover, the length ofthe island was about 250 meters.

But after that, the swimming area occurred onthe west of the beach. Furthermore, the accommodation facilities are built bothto the east of the beach and in the central area of the island. Between the twoparts, there is a restaurant in the north of the island and a reception in thesouth. To be specific, all these facilities and the beach are connected by thefootpath. In addition, there is also the vehicle track combining the pier onthe south of the island and the reception.

All in all, the numbers of trees there do notchange during the construction. So is the total acres of the island including thebeach. Obviously, the sea near the island are used for activities and there aremore facilities for eating, living and traveling service, which makes theisland become a good tour place.


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