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题目:Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventuallyreplace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To whatextent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Recently, convenience foods become more andmore popular since it invented. Thus some people claim that traditional foodsand traditional methods of food preparation will be replaced by these foods. Frommy own perspective, I disagree with this view.

Admittedly, convenience foods aretime-saving and offer more people more conveniences so that individuals getmore leisure time. After working a long day, we are too tired to cook. By eatingconvenience foods, we could gain more time to relax and rest. Moreover,housewives get more time and energy to look after and nurture their offspringby eating convenience food.

However, convenience foods are much moreexpensive than the traditional ones. The prices of them are twice higher thantheir counterparts in supermarkets, or even higher. It should spend a largeamount of money to buy those prepared foods. This is unaffordable for ordinaryfamilies and the individuals with lower salaries.

Furthermore, the traditional procedure offood preparation can offer opportunities for family members to enhance theirbonds. They also enjoy much fun when the whole family work together to prepare atraditional meal. For instance, families always prepare traditional meals inthe New Year night in China and get family reunion.

Overall, I firmly believe the traditionalfoods and methods of food preparation cannot be replaced by convenience foodbecause it is cheaper and enjoyful.

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