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Competitiveness is seen as a positive quality for people to have in many societies today. How does this competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative quality?

With the tendency that the world concentrate more on personal ability. Competitiveness has become an increasingly important factor for everyone and result in plenty of influence. In this easily, I will discuss the effects and its advantage and disadvantage.

It is undeniable that people with a higher competitiveness are more likely to be hired. Competitive power include various aspect in terms of learning, creativity and communication etc. That is to say, public who have a those capacity tend to find decent job more easily in our community. Moreover, outstanding competitors tend to build strong relationship with others and become really attractive. By contrast, normal person would often be ignored or cannot make enough friends to expand their social circle. Nevertheless, there are some positives sides and drawbacks in this quality.

Personally, competitive force usually bring about positive influence regarding promote the development of individuals and society. People who have competitive force would own abilities especially with regard to innovation and originality which lead to great difference in the world and absolutely changed our life. For example, the invention of cars encourage our life become more convenient and internet boosts the widespread of information. Admittedly, competitiveness is of great significance to the world.

However, the competitive force remains certain negative sides for society as a whole. This capacity could affect individuals and encourage them become dangerous, such as too ambitious and aggressive. As a result, they might damage their friends and families in terms of physical and psychological aspect. Ordinary person tend to be more friendly and accessible when compared with those who performance extremely aggressive in competence.

In conclusion, we should not neglect the disadvantage of competitiveness, but the the positive influence is more essential for development instead of the personal situition. By that i mean, We should focus on exploiting competetiveness.

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