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It is said that punishment is important to help children learn the difference between right and wrong. To a large extent, I tend to agree that proper punishment can be helpful in teaching children distinguish right and wrong, although punishment has some drawbacks on children.

Punishment is an effective and efficient method to be used in teaching process. This is because children are too young to know the distinction between right and wrong if they are simply told something is correct or incorrect. Children may be not aware that their certain behaviors are improper unless they are punished by their parents or teachers. In other word, unpleasant experience is always more impressive than the pleasant experience. For instance, a child, who used to be late in classes, can hardly realize unpunctuality is a bad manner in school unless he is punished for his behavior.

However, punishment may have some bad psychological impacts on children. In their early age, children enjoy the time they spend with their peers, and want to be popular among their friends. The children who are punished by their teacher may be thought bad ones and isolated by their classmates. As a result, the punished children may be unhappy and frustrated about their school lives.

In conclusion, it is true that punishment is a useful method in teaching children to distinguish from right and wrong. To avoid the bad impacts on children, it is advised that teachers choose some soft method for punishment, such as more homework, and try to keep this kind of punishment in privately.

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