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The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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    The first pie chart gives information about how energy is consumed by an average Australian household, while the second pie chart illustrates the greenhouse gas emissions generated by the energy consumption.
    It is clear from the first chart that heating accounts for 42% of overall energy use, making it the way that consumes most energy. Water heating ranks second, with 30% energy in Australian families used because of it. Other applicances represents 15% of energy consumption, with refrigeration followed behind(7%). And the use of lighting and cooling are the least in these six categories, making up only 4% and 2% respectively.
    As is can be seen in the second chart, more than half of the greenhouse gas emissions in Australian household is caused by water heating(32%) and other applicances. The proportion of heating(15%) is similar to that of refrigeration(14%). However, lighting and cooling becomes the two ways that emit the least greenhouse gas, which constitute 8% and 3% respectively.
    Overall, heating consumes nearly half of Australian household energy and water heating is the most significant contributing factor that results in Australian household greenhouse gas emissions.

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