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        b)  Some people think government should invest more money in teaching science than other
subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

Nowadays an increasing number of people are concerned about developing their own countries by the means of education. Some people believe that the government should invest more money in teaching science subject, while other people think the government should pay even attention to all subjects. I mainly agree with the former view for the following reasons.
First, it has been universally acknowledged that science create productivity to the society. This is because that science can accelerate the process of production, make it more convenient and economical, and increase the efficiency. Without science, many key departments of a country, like the industry, the public transportation and the medical system, cannot function normally.
Moreover, if the government invest more on science, the country is more likely to nurture a lot of science talents it needs. The investment and support from the government will generate a great motivation for the schools and the students. For example, in the 1950s, China cultivated a group of science talents by investing in science education, which contributed to the development of this young country. Only with enough science talents can we develop science and let science benefit the country, and investment on science teaching is the best way to approach it.
Those who habour the opinion that the government should focus on all subjects, however, may argue that some other subjects like art are also important for a country. Indeed for the sake of all-rounded development the government should also invest on other subjects. Yet in general I think science deserves the most investment in all subjects.
In sum, the government should invest more on science teaching for developing rapidly and constantly. Meanwhile, other subjects should not be neglected. Only in this way can we develop a country in an effective, sustainable and health way.

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