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Topic: Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


With the rapid development digital informative world, some people believe that children can obtain a lot of knowledge from television. They regard watching television as an effective learning method, which should be encouraged both at home and at school. However, from my point of view, although television learning method may draw students' interests, students cannot reap benefits by watching TV.

The first point to note is that television programs may have some inappropriate content, which will mislead students' behavior. Specifically, some television programs have violent contents and crime, which may foster students' aggressive values in mistaken. They may generate wrong belief that violence is an effective and appropriate way to cope with problems.

Moreover, spending long hours on watching television may influence students' health and make them inactivity. Children will less likely participate in extra-curriculum activities if they watch television too long. Meanwhile, it will cause several health problems such as eyesight deterioration and obesity.

Last but not least, students lack abilities of judgment, they may be addicted with some sensatory but useless television series, such as soap opera. In the end, spending long time on indulging television series will deprive students' opportunities of interaction and communication. Meanwhile, those useless TV programs may have adverse impact on students' study and lead to a drop on study's score. Students may find difficult to focus on learning tasks.

To sum up, watching television may have adverse influence on students' study and development. This will mislead students' behavior, influence students' health and make them addicted. Therefore, as far as I'm concerned, school and parents should restrict the time and contents of watching television for students so that they can guarantee students to grow up in a healthy and great way.

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