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发表于 2015-9-6 23:02 |显示全部楼层
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Some people think that strictpunishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents.Others, however, believe that other measure would be more effective inimproving road safety. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


   Since traffic accident has not a rare ting , some people believe thatstrict punishments should be given to people who broken traffic regulations. PersonallyI do not agree with this view point.


   Admittedly, punishments could deter some dangerous driving behavior to somedegree. For example, a driver choose to run the red light in order to savetime, and after government public a more strict chastisement for drivingoffences, like throw those people into prison, this driver may stop thisdangerous behavior because he is afraid of get punished. It seems reasonablethat strict punishments could improve local road safety in some occasions. Butwhat should not be ignored is that a large part of perpetrators did not recognizethey have broken traffic laws until the accidents happened.


   I do believe that there are other measures could reduce trafficaccident rates. First and foremost, local community could run large campaignsto arose residences’ awareness of road safety. For instance, drivers could beshown videos about the serious consequences of dangerous driving, and then theywould stop those bad behaviors during their driving process. Secondly, settingnotice symbols could be another useful solution of this phenomenon. Driverswould get more information about road condition through these symbols, therebyhelping them make proper decision.


   To sum up, I do not think strict punishment plays a significant role inreducing traffic accident. There are other alternative choices could solve thisproblem in a more proper way.

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I do believe that there are other measures could reduce trafficaccident rates. First and foremost, local community could run large campaignsto arose residences’ awareness of road safety. For instance, drivers could beshown videos about the serious consequences of dangerous driving, and then theywould stop those bad behaviors during their driving process. Secondly, settingnotice symbols could be another useful solution of this phenomenon. Driverswould get more information about road condition through these symbols, therebyhelping them make proper decision.


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