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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this a positive or negative development?

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The globalization of industry and commerce has such an impact on modern life that different counties are becoming more and more similar. That can be reflected by the fact that people buy the same products anywhere in the world. Yet, there remains some controversy as to whether such a phenomenon is positive or negative. Personally, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Several reasons are listed below.

First and foremost, the ability of purchasing what the customers want is the symbol of raising the living standard. It is the human nature to possess something valuable. If the products are really popular with customers domestic and abroad, they are definitely high-quality and well-functioned. Only those who are struggling with poverty will choose those inferior commodity. So, purchasing the high-quality products, despite the similarity, can improve the customers feeling of wellbeing.

Furthermore, the world-wide circulation of the products doubtlessly has a positive influence on the national income. That is the reason why most countries want to explore the overseas markets and sell their products abroad. Also, the globalized commerce promote the culture transmission, thereby increasing mutual understanding among different countries.

Those opponents may argue that the globalization will has a negative impact on the local manufacture industry or economy. For those developing countries, products from advanced nations always pose a severe threat to their local industry since those developed countries are often equipped with much capital and superior technology. However, we should not give up eating for the experience of choked.

In summary, I believe that the globalization of commerce is an irreversible trend. Although some negative effect can be spotted, the overall positive impact should not be neglected. (278)


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