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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and thechnology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


These days more and more students are able to go to university and continue their studies. However, debate spreads. Some people believe that students should choose any subject they are interested in to study after entering university, yet others argue that it would be much better off to study some more practical majors like science and technology. In my point of view, I consider the former one as a better choice.

It is conspicuous that studying favourite subject has series of advantages. To be exact, first, it will offer the original motivation which is quite critical for students as fully activating their potentials. Second, being in university is as much as like being in a micro society, students are more likely to find their social positions and careers by selecting the subject they are in to, hence they will not confuse about the future when they graduate. Last but not least, it will allow students to put more concentration and time on the subject they like and will not get tired of what they learn.

On the other hand, if all student can only be allowed to study some subjects which probably be useful in their future, not only they would not have a desirable score when they graduate, but also they are wasting their precious time during in university. Besides, absence of class, video games and other distractions will interfere with the students' study and maybe sabotage their bright future.

To sum up, as Einstein once said, "the interest is the best teacher." Only finding our own specialities in the duration of being in university can we make a full use of our valuable time and energy for a promising future.

字数282, 时间50min......感觉完全找不到有力的论据去证明自己的论点。。。求老师提点!!!跪谢!!

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希望老师尽快批改哦~
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老师~求剑10test2 作文task2的范文~谢谢!祝老师身体健康
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请耐心等待,雅思作文批改区的待批改文章比较多,不过一般发文两天内都会被专业老师批改,请留意自己的账号通知。

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发表于 2015-10-21 21:02 |显示全部楼层
REALLY WANNA SEE THE REPLY!!!!
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上来学习学习,等会自己写一篇试试~
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发表于 2015-11-5 23:21 |显示全部楼层
谢谢老师指导!!!!!!!!!!!!
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