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The given first bar chart compares thereasons for study according to age of students and the second chart givesdetails regarding whether they receive support from their employers.
It is clear that young people tend to studyfor their careers while older age groups are likely to study due to theirinterests. Employers’ supports are commonly given to youngest students.
Around 80% of students aged under 26 studyto further their careers while only 10% of them study because of interests. Thegap between these two proportions narrows as students get older. Surprisingly,the figures for students who are in their 40s are the same, at roughly 40%.Students aged over 49 tend to study for interest (70%) rather than for career(less than 20%).
Just over 60% of students aged under 26 aresupported by their employers, including time off and help with fees. By contrast,the 30-39 age group is the most self-sufficient, with about 30% of them receivesupport. The figures for students aged 40 to 49 and for those aged over 40 riseslightly, with about 35% and 42% respectively.

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