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本帖最后由 Ericdemonielt 于 2015-10-5 14:32 编辑

Some people think distance learning hasmore benefit than schools, so schools will disappear from our lives. To whatextent do you agree or disagree?



Recent decades have witnessed that many peoplechoose distance learning nowadays. Some people insist that the merits of suchlearning programs are better than schools and believe that schools should bereplaced by distance learning. From my perspective, I am partially agree withthis argument.



On the one hand, there are some benefitsthat distance learning could bring. Initially, distance learning providesconvenience and flexibility compare with traditional education. Individuals canaccess to a course anytime and anywhere through the advanced internet or cableTV connection. The users can also arrange different combinations of courseaccording to different situations, such as when to submit the assignments oreven when to complete the exam. Additionally, distance learning could be morecost effective. Students who study at traditional schools might spend a largeamount of money on meals and transports every day. By contrast, such theseexpenditures could be deducted through distance learning. For this reason, learningthrough distance is better than traditional school.



On the other hand, although innovativedistance-learning technology can bring such benefits, it is still hard to replace traditional education. To begin with, the purpose of education shouldnot only delivery information, but also include cultivation of communicating behavior and development of group discussion skills, which cannot be involved inonline courses. Furthermore, campus based education tend to provide a humaninteraction that can share the experience with other individuals in reality,while online education rarely helps to do so, due to the long physicaldistance.



To sum up, I am convinced that in spite ofsuperior advantages in transferring information can be provided by onlinecourse, it should only be used as supplementary tool as education is more than deliveringthe knowledge. Human interaction and corporation behavior are the key elementsin education, which are the reason that school established for.

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