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Task2:The best way for government to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day,7days a week.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  From Beijing to New York,traffic congestion has become more and more serious in recent years.To solve this problem,some sing its praise  believe that the government should offer free public transport 24 hours a day,7 days a week,while others,on the other hand,contend that this will cause another type of traffic  problem.This essay attempts to outline both two arguments and shed some personal light on that.
  Those who are in favor of free public transport do have their argument.Given that governments have the ability as well as the reaponsibility to solve social problem; hence, when cities are haunting by traffic congestion,it is time for governments to value this problem and take some actions.In addition, providing free transport could solve traffic jam by reducing the number of  private cars on the sreets.As the number of private cars get less, the bus could run smoothly without obstacles.
  Albeit, providing free public transportation seems reasonable,it could cause another type of  problems at the same time.The first point to make is that governments would get heavier financial burden.Running a public transpot system costs a lot even though there are not so many public transport routes today.To afford higher expense,governments have to set a higher level of tax.Forthermore,when all people are inclined to use public transport system,the public transport system could be overloaded.For instance, the bus might break down or individuals might get injuries when too many citizens flock to it, and it could be another kind of expense to matain these broken bus.
  Sufficed to say,I do agree government should place sufficient emphasis on solving traffic jam.Nonetheless,it is not that realistic that for governments to provide free transport every moment.I reckon that governments could solve traffic jam by expanding an appropriate number of bus routes or enlarging roads.As long as the government could take action within its financial ability,the situation would get better.

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