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Task 1

This graph shows the changes of theexpenditures of four different food in a European country from 1979 to 2004 .
In the span of 25 years , the consumptionof chicken increased significantly , started from around 140 grams per personwhich was slightly lower than chicken consumption and 80 grams lower than thenumber of beef in 1979 reached to 250 grams per person in 2004 that exceededboth beef and lamb cost dramatically .
According to the graph , there was aconsiderable decrease on beef and lamb expense . In 1979 , the quantity ofspend on beef and lamb were 220 grams per person and 150 grams per personrespectively . Although there was a moderate rise of beef consumption between1981 and 1983 , the number declined on the following 23 years . Finally thebeef and lamb consumption went down to 105 grams and 60 grams respectively in2004 .
To our surprise , the consume on fish seemedremained the same with only 20 grams fell during all these years (from 60 gramsper person in 1979 to 40 grams per person). Moreover , the quantity people consumedon fish was always the least .

Task 2

Nowadays , there is a wide discussion abouthow to decide on the punishment for each type of crime . Part of people thinkthat different type of criminal should be sentenced in a certain punishment butothers argue that when deciding on punishment , circumstances of individualcrime should be considered . In my opinion , as the same crime punish differentpeople by a fix standard mechanically is not an appropriate mode.
Those who agree on fixed punishment thinkthat the core spirit of justice is that all men are equal in the sight of law .Therefore , a fixed judgment for a certain type of crime can show thefairness to the society . In this way , all the sentences can be without controversy. What’s more , fixed punishment can improve the efficiency of judgement sincethe verdict is the same as the previous one . A judge can make a sentencequickly so that a large quantity of the resource of justice can be saved .
Others , however , disagree on fixedpunishment because they believe that the condition of a criminal should betaken into consideration . It is declared by this part of people that whenjudging a person , we are ought to think over not only his or her behavioursitself but also the motivation and the potential effect to the public . In somesituation , people are forced to do the crime which may because of violence orindifference they always receive . Or someone killed another scoundrel whoalways do things extremely detrimental to other people . Considering thesecircumstance , making the same punishment for a certain type of crime simply isnot right .
In a conclusion , as the background of a criminous behavior is complex , the punishment sentence should not merelydepend on the crime type but rely on an entire consideration on the situationsand motivations of an individual crime for committing it .

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