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Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important things people learn are from their families.


In contemporary society, the importance of family plays an increasingly important role in our daily life. Along with this idea comes a heated discussion: which one is most important thing in their life? The family? Some people hold the opinion that people learn the most important things in their life from their families. From my perspective, by a big margin, I disagree to this opinion and I think people usually learn the most significant thing in school.

Admittedly, I have to concede that families teach us the first and fundamental lesson in our life. We learned how to speak and how to walk from parents. Whats more, ever since we were born, under the environment surrounding by the love of whole family members, we learned how to take care of others, understand other people's feelings and comprehend other people's way of thinking. We initially see the fantastic world from families’ point of view. But the thing which we learn from families is decreasing as we are growing up.

Second, it is the schools that teach people academic knowledge which is one of the most crucial part in peoples career. As the saying goes, knowledge is power. In other words, school offers a glimpse of the knowledge of math, Chinese, English, chemistry, biology, physics, etc, which is benefits to getting a better job with higher salary in the future. And the significance of an eminent career is self-evident. With reference of a survey made by Peking University recently, asking about what have influenced your career most, 80 percent of responds select knowledge. Therefore, knowledge plays a vital role in enterprise and schools do have profound influence on peoples career.
   
Last but not least, the another crucial feature of school is that we can meet classmates and learn how to develop a friendship. Where you learn how to make a friendship? When you make your first friend? The answer could lie in a recent study from the Department of Sociology in Johns Hopkins University. They pointed out that near 93.2 percent of respondents hold the opinion that their true friends come from primary or high school. Albeit, probably, with no understanding of the precise implication of friendship at the beginning, we catch the meaning of friendship gradually during studying and playing together. Obviously, we should gratitude to school because it offers us the opportunity to learning friendship which is indispensible in peoples life.

Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons of knowledge and friendship, I reinforce my stand point that people learn the most important thing in schools and there is no point to state that family has taught the most imperative lessons of one’s life.

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