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Question:Educating children is a more difficult tasktoday than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cellphone,online games and social networking websites.

Nowadays more and more students usecellphone and computer at an early age. The interesting online games and otherappealing functions of these devices make students put in amount of time in it.It seems that spending long time on computer and cellphone can be harmful tostudents as it is difficult to let them concentrate in studying. But in myopinion, the reality would be abstract, or in other word, these intelligentdevices can be helpful in studying and living.
   First, social networking websites can benefit students a lot. Forinstance, they can share their emotion with friends all the time. In China,most families only have one child because of the policy, which make students beeasily to feel lonely at home. However, the emergence of social networkingwebsites help to tackle the issue. Through these website students can know whattheir friends are doing, and make a comment, just like they are workingtogether. What's more, some famous people like president Obama also haveaccounts on popular social networks, by viewing their speeches students canexpand their vision and more concern about politics.
   Second, online games can train students' social skills. In fact, onlinegame is not just a computer game, it seems more like a mini society which everyplayer lived in. As we all know, most students only have small circle offriends like classmates for they always appear in schools and their homes,don't have chances to work with others. Yet the online games give them the opportunitythat they can play with strangers and be friends with them who come from anywhere,any age. Then students can talk with those players and improve their vision andsocial skill gradually. However, being addicted to the game indeed is harmfulto students, but we can't ignore its advantages. After all, most studentplayers are just play it for relaxing.
    Ina word, smartphone, online games and social websites can definitely benefit tostudents on studying and living. Albeit these products of the information agecost amount of time of students, every product has its unique excellence. I'msure with the help of these productions, our generations can be more mature onthinking and talking and more efficiently on studying.

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