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Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage.
The author focuses on issue that salvage loging is helpful to deal with problems for three reasons. While the speaker presents his opposite thought that it will bring nothing but end up as a harmful result.

As the passage declares, its first reason is that salvage logging is likely to help forest refresh from the fire. In contrast, the professor stress the impossibility that it will help because composion can make the soil obtain more nutrition, without this step, the plant can`t grow successfully. Thus, the assumption of the author is severely weakened.

Second, the passage maintains that salvage logging will pave a way to reduce the effect caused by insects. Again, this is retorted by the professor. He says the forest comes to a habitat not only for insects but also other speicies like bird. If we remove those wood, many species will also lose their homes.

Finally, the author takes it for granted that it will bring us an economical benefit. Yet the professor casts doubt to that. He insist that this benefit will be very small and won`t last long because the special equipment and technique that are required. Besides, the job that needed is also temporary. So the evidences that provided by the professor was completely rejected the opinion shown in the passage.




Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadys, more and more people choose to have a travel in their spare time. Some people would like to go to abroad where they can appreciate totally different natural beauity, while others prefer stay at their own country. So here is where the controversy raise. From my perspactive,  travelling abroad would benefit us more.

First of all, travelling in another different city can benefit us mentally. It pave us a way to go deep into another country`s culture and help us to expand our knowledge. Take myself for an instance, I went to America with our school study group during the summer vacation last year. By enjoying that special trip, I visited various famous spots like National Park and so forth. To be honest, I was a little shocked when seeing this different stage of nature , this excited experience can`t be learned from any books or showed by any picture. Moreover, police office and hospital were also impressed us. In this period, we aborbed completely two kinds of country system and culture comparing to our own. I have to say that this must be one of unforgottable memory in my life.

Secondly, travelling abroad will make an important role in making friends who come from differnt cultural backgounds. We can chat in English and share some opinions about some famous international events. Making accquaints in this way will not only help us to expand our social circle but also keep ourselves from narrowminded, our mind can always stay fresh when we contact with those foreign friends. Furthermore, the global enconomy will be improved when the connection between each country become more and more tight.

Althought we can also gain a great amout of knowledge as we visit our own country. Paying a visit to Hunan or Guangdong province will also gave us a new experiences,  it is still limited. Many people fail to see the advantages that by visiting aborad, we have to face many obstacles and uncertaintis like language and customs that we are not familiar with. Therefore, travelling just becomes an opportunity for us to live independently. It`s up for us to live on our own and try our best to welcome a new language and adapt to a new environment.

To sum up, taking into  account of all these factors, we can achieve the conclusion that people benefit more from travelling to foreign country instead of our own.




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