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Task 2 : Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the only way to reduce trafficaccidents. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, high rate of traffic accidents has caused public concern. Some people hold the view that strict punishment for driving offences is the only way to reduce these accidents. However, I disagree with this view.

Strict punishment which is imposed to people who drive dangerously may be a great way to deter dangerous driving sometimes. People tend to obey traffic rules after they have been punished. There is no denying that giving some advice to people who do not observe traffic rules instead of punishing won’t shock them and enable them to realize mistakes they have made. On the other hand, punishing people who have violated traffic rules may increase people’s fear of driving offences, which means a warning to them. If drivers could have awareness of punishment, they would obey the rules because they do not want to be punished on account of driving offences.

However, punishment for driving offences is not the only way to reduce traffic accidents. There are various ways also having this function. For instance, showing some pictures and videos about people who were injured or dead because of driving offences on TV can also have the same effect as punishment. From these sharp and shocking images, people will raise their awareness of traffic safety. Another way can be used is to attaching some warning signs to caution people not to commit driving offences. At sight of these signs, drivers will focus on driving and taking care of the situation of traffic.

In a word, punishing people who commit driving offences strictly is a good way to reduce the traffic accidents. However, it’s not the only way can be used to avoid these accidents.


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发表于 2015-12-2 10:15 |显示全部楼层
希望老师尽快批改哦
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心如焚烧- 发表于 2015-12-02 10:15
希望老师尽快批改哦
想问一下,一般批改要等多久
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发表于 2015-12-3 10:02 |显示全部楼层
想问一下,一般批改要等多久
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发表于 2015-12-6 22:19 |显示全部楼层
老师批完了速度学习一下,但是还要回复了才能看评论也真是醉了。
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