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Nowadays, more and more jobs and tasks are done by machines which involve hard physical work. Does these effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects?


With the development of technology, factories now make use of machines to do a lot of work humans used to do. Machines play an increasingly vital role in a lot of works, especially in hard physical works. There always have been heated discussions on the trend of using machines instead of labor force. In my opinion, this trend outweighs the negative effect.

In my essay, this trend will be discussed in three aspects, efficiency, safety and economy. Firstly, it is true that machines promote the working and production efficiency in numerous manufacturing industries. Companies can invest lower labor cost but gain huger product outputs. For instance, in industries of fine chemicals and cars, automations can help to control the defective goods to save the costs and raw materials because they can provide much precise measurement than people can do. Secondly, in some dangerous job and work environments, people can use machines to avoid working injuries. Therefore, companies can save insurance expenditures and their employees can be well protected. Lastly, as the consequence, total profits can be increased due to high efficiency and low risk.

However, the discussions above are all based on the standpoint of companies. When it turns of the individuals, there still are some negative effects like what Albert Einstein said ‘The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people, but that people will begin to think like machines.’ If people over rely on using machines instead of thinking by themselves, they may lose their own thoughts. Obviously, in manufacturing, machineries dose most of the work in factories and more and more positions have been replaced to them. People now face the fact that automation of production processes has led to increase unemployment. Furthermore, the development use of machineries may have significant impact on traditional industries.

To sum up my discussion, although there are negative effects of using machines, people cannot stop the development of machines. They bring benefits to modern industries and change the way people work.

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