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发表于 2016-1-16 19:28 |显示全部楼层
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Question: Some industrialized countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living.?To what extent do you agree or disagree??


1. It is true that many developed countries have suffered serious environmental problems on their way to prosperity. Some people argue that to develop the economy, countries will certainly experience environmental hazards.?Personally, I tend to agree with the idea.


2. From the industrialised point of view, I think we need to know the efficiency of energy. It is significant for the development of economy; reclaim the household and the industrial waste that based their classification on standard. The media should increase people’s awareness of the importance of environmental protection.


3. It is easy to know from the website of the city planning. There have toghter living and manufactures some place about the design as scientific as homage environmental, for example, a far going ecological park, use the export pipelines of underground transfer the gas and the waste to the end, and can not see the contamination sourse above the groud. It would be best invite the officials to look around like this place, compare with themselves’ contaminated town, how should to do in the future.


4.From the cases, we can see the state is making efforts positively.?I am sure that with the development of science and technology, the strategies to protect the environment will be more mature. Before other companies that take bring pollution to outside we must be confine; weather clearly the refuse where to go? How to treat them suitably and the ministrant equipments had perfect effectively.


5.In conclusion, we hope the next few years will have good conversion continuously. No matter whatever govenments or citizens from any countries were very care the damage to the environment at prensent.

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发表于 2016-1-16 19:32 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2016-1-17 15:21 |显示全部楼层
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JessicaZhang  不好意思!你的这篇,我会晚些改,所以我先把回复删除了!我想再看看你前面的几篇,好好梳理一下,明天早些时候,再给你回复。可以吗?  详情 回复 发表于 2016-1-17 15:34
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不好意思!你的这篇,我会晚些改,所以我先把回复删除了!我想再看看你前面的几篇,好好梳理一下,明天早些时候,再给你回复。可以吗?

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luciferinabyss  太好了 最近压力比较大 心比较忙 我需要更仔细的看您之前的回复 好好总结  详情 回复 发表于 2016-1-17 17:41
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JessicaZhang 发表于 2016-1-17 15:34
不好意思!你的这篇,我会晚些改,所以我先把回复删除了!我想再看看你前面的几篇,好好梳理一下,明天早 ...

太好了 最近压力比较大 心比较忙 我需要更仔细的看您之前的回复 好好总结
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发表于 2016-1-18 09:01 |显示全部楼层
感谢您的参与,小站写作王牌老师JessicaZhang为您作出如下点评:
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luciferinabyss  好的 请老师不要客气的批评指正  详情 回复 发表于 2016-1-18 12:17
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JessicaZhang 发表于 2016-1-18 09:01
感谢您的参与,小站写作王牌老师JessicaZhang为您作出如下点评:
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好的 请老师不要客气的批评指正
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