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 Some people argue that young people do not have enough time to community with each other. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are several reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is nowadays I think the young people just change to a different way to community with each others, they are using a more convenient way to connect with they friends. Currently, we have internet, the internet can make the distance between each other become shorter, they are a lot of tools that depend on internet have been invent from people, such as “wechat, QQ,facebook”,although we can’t community face to face, but we also can know each other from the internet, a more simple way to community with others.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that the community of young people now is practically wasting time, most of them are talking about games, movies, or foods. They are probably not talking about something useful. For example, in my class, after school most of us are talking about the games, the news of the movie star, none of us are talking the homework, therefore, because of this reason I think the community isn’t very important to the young people.
What is more, some students are interested as the development of society, people have so many works have to handle and their schedule is really tight. Young man is not a exception. From some certain angle,when young people first entering to the society for they career ,they have to face the most hard period of time in their life. To illustrate, for some graduate student, both study and work stress overwhelmed them. Therefore, nowadays young people do not give enough time to helping their communities just because they actually have no that much time to do.
In a word, for those three reason I think the young people don’t have enough time to community with each other is reasonable.

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