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These two bar charts illustrate the futurechoices for British graduate and postgraduate students who didn’t choose toenter full-time work in 2008.
In terms of graduate’s situations in chartone, 29665 students decided to continue their study after graduation, which wasmore popular than the other three decisions. In contrast, part-time workattracted 17735 students and this number is 1500 higher than unemployed one. Atlast, merely 3500 graduates devoted their future to the volunteer work.
As for the postgraduate’s considerations inchart two, the major trends were the same with chart one. 2725 students, stillthe hotter choice than others, kept on studying to an advanced level. However,the distinction between part-time work and further study were diminished. Theamount of student doing part-time job was 2535, just 190 lower than that ofstudents selecting further study. Respectively, voluntary work and unemploymentstill occupied the third and fourth prevalent decision, with 1625 and 345postgraduates.
In conclusion, the distribution of futureworks are similar between graduate and postgraduate while the number ofgraduate on each type of choice was nearly ten times than that of postgraduateexcept part-time work. Besides, unemployment was a big problem for both groups.

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