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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

        Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The 2 graphs below show the destination of graduates and postgraduates who didn’t choose full-time work in UK.
Further study is the most popular choice of both graduates and postgraduates, with the numbers of 29665 and 2725 respectively. For both of them, the second welcome one is to do a part-time work. But compared with the graduates, postgraduates get a smaller gap between further study and part- time job, which means a larger proportion of postgraduates went into this kind of work.
Next comes to the unemployment, one destination which ranks the 3rd. The levels of the 2 categories are similar, with 16235 of graduates and 1625 of postgraduates. At last, it can be seen that the least students would like to do volunteer jobs. The amounts of both are nearly 10 times less than further study, the most popular one.
To summarize, students in UK preferred to continue their studies than other destinations. Among them, volunteer job is the least popular one.





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