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题目:
The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European coutries.
Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

作文:
The tables present sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999  and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
It can be clearly seen from the tables that UK was the best-seller of coffee in 2004(20 millions), while Switzerland sold more bananas than other four countries in 2004(47 millions). In addition, Switzerland sold 3 millions of euros in 1999 which ranked No.1, and then, decreased to the second place in 2004 with a sales of 6 millions. Sweden had the least sale amount of coffe in both years.
The sale amount of bananas in UK grew dramatically during the two years, from 1 million in 1999 to 5.5 millions in 2004. In comparason, the sales conditions of bananas in Sweden and Denmark droped a little seperatelly.
In conclusion, the sales of coffee in five countries all arose in the period from 1999 to 2004. At the same time, the five countries experienced different situations in terms of sales of bananas during the priod.
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