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Many peoplebelieve that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a hugenegative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?


With thedevelopment of technology, an increasing prevalence of social networking sites,for instance, Facebook, Twitter and the like, have placed huge influence onpeople’s life. Due to this, some people believe that these social media havebrought plenty of negative influence on individuals as well as society. In myview, although they have negative impact, their positive influence should notbe denied.

On one hand,it is undeniable that the prevailing social networking sites negatively affectboth individuals and society. As for individuals, most of them spend time inchatting with others on Facebook or other social media via phones or computerswhich in turn makes them hardly concentrate on their work or study andmeanwhile gives rise to bad eyesight or other physical issues. In terms ofsociety, social media have brought some frauds which makes severe loss tosociety. This is because most social media are based on the Internet, if thecyber security is not enhanced, confidentiality of personal information cannotbe guaranteed. For example, some illegal behaviours are conducted throughsocial networking sites by stealing the account information of others to makeprofits.

However, onthe other hand, there is no doubt that social media do play a crucial role inpeople’s life as well as society. With the popularity of social networkingsites, communication between people can be more efficient and cost-saving, comparedwith previous years when someone who goes abroad cannot be contacted timelywith lower cost. When it comes to society, social media have provided aplatform that everyone can get involved in creating a better society because everyone’s behaviour is overseen by the other. This will ensure that illegal actions can be reduced to some extent.

In conclusion, according to the idea mentioned above, it is true that socialnetworking sites have some drawbacks and negatively affect both individuals andsociety. However, their positive effects cannot be neglected.



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