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剑桥10 TEST1
It is importantfor children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent doyou agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort ofpunishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach goodbehaviour to children?
Answer:
It is true that understandingof which is right or wrong is vital for children’s growth. I agree that parentsand teachers can use punishment to help children to tell the difference, butthe punishment must be used in scientific methods.
The ability ofchildren has not developed enough so that they are vulnerable for misleading,and punishment can help them get a right understanding of their behaviors.Children are curious for the surroundings, so they may learn some bad habitssuch as telling lies and stealing items from other teenagers. They may notrealize the influence of this habit, and parents and teachers should point outthe disadvantages of this behavior. Punishment is also very useful to stopchildren’s mistakes. Just a Chinese Proverb said, “If people stool a node whenhe is child, then he may steal a cattle when he grows up”.
Punishment must bescientific and not hurt children’s feeling and self-respect. Two kinds ofpunishment are available. The first one is that adults can forbid childrendoing their interesting things. For example, if they can not correct theirmistakes immediately, they can not see the cartoon movies any more. Writing a reflectionis another useful method. Children should reflect on themselves and get a deepunderstanding of the cause and consequence of their wrong behaviors.
In conclusion, teachingchildren to learn the distinction between right and wrong is crucial for theirdevelopment, and punishment must be used in a scientific way.

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