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Many governments think that economicprogress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that othertypes of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.
Nowadays, many countries believe that it istheir most important duty to boost economic development. However, opponents ofthis view argue that authorities should put emphasis on other types ofprogress. In this essay, I will explore both of the views with putting forwardmy personal opinion in the end.
On one hand, it is indeed the responsibilityfor governments to develop economy. Frankly speaking, financial investment, tosome extent, has a huge impact on people’s daily life, from education, transportation,to health care. It is obvious that developed counties usually own a higher GDPwhich is related to citizens’ quality of life and leads to a huge difference inthe level of happiness of residents. Moreover, economic development is used tomeasure the level of the strength of a country. In other words, it means howpowerful a country is. To obtain more right in the cooperation of countries,increasing number of governments have to devote their most efforts to developeconomy.
On the other hand, there are arguments infavor of considering other developments. The most significant one, may beenvironment issues. Due to long term human activities, human beings are facedwith a variety of environment problems, such as air pollution, acid rain and deforestation.Thus, steps should be made before it is too late. Only by doing this can wemaintain a sustainable earth. Besides, since society is becoming more moneyrelated these years, mental and art construction should be put into agenda.Being obsessed with the excitement from luxury material daily living,self-cultivation, inner peace and appreciation of beauty may be neglected,which result in high rate of crime.
From my personal perspective, education,environment protecting and other types of progress are as important as economicdevelopment, even though economic development may seem more imperative to a fewshort sighted governments in such an economic downturn
In conclusion, financial problems may takehigher priority in some countries, but we should remember that the most importantduty for human being is to make earth much healthy, not only for themselves,but also for the next generation of them.

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