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The table and piechart present the numbers of the total visitors and the results of contentsurvey made among visitors respectively in two same period before and after therefurbishment of ashdown museum.

First of all,obviously, there appears a big difference in the total number of visitors with ajump of 18000 from 74000 (before) to 92000 (after),which indicates that therefurbishment has acquire a good effect.

From the chart, wecan see that very satisfied experiences a relatively apparent increase by 20%with 15% in the year before and 35% in the year after, whilst similarlysatisfied rises to 40%. But the dissatisfied and very dissatisfied undergodecrease in different degree. Dissatisfied drops sharply to 15% in the yearafter (40% before), as for very dissatisfied, it drops slightly by 5%(10% to5%).  Besides ,the no response remainsunchanged as 5%.

All in all, thechanges are distinct that more satisfied feedbacks and less dissatisfiedfeedbacks are received, reflected by the result pattern with the biggest percentagegoing to dissatisfied which is replaced by satisfied later.

All of this showedabove are trying to prove this successful refurbishment.  

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