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综合写作:

【阅读】
Topic: 如何保护青蛙数量的减少,提出了3个解决方案
1.禁止使用杀虫剂
2.应用反真菌感染的治疗,避免青蛙皮变薄而干死
3.保护青蛙的栖息地免受人类活动干扰导致水源的减少

【听力】
教授不同意
1.管制杀虫剂不现实,被管制的田地的作物长不好因为害虫就不受控了,这对农民来说不公平
2.这种治疗非常复杂又昂贵,因为得单个青蛙治疗,还无法阻止繁殖传染
3.人类活动并没有导致水减少,是全球变暖

正文里面有拼写错误,辛苦老师了。。。主要是原生态不敢改错。

正文
The reading passage gives three solutions to slowing down the population decline of frogs. On the contrary, the professor in the lecture holds opposite views towards all those three solutions.

First of all, the reading passage believes that by prohibiting the use of harmful pesticide near sensitive frog populations would be a critical solution to reducing the harm pesticide has done to frogs. Whereas the professor asserts that it is not practical for areas where pesticides are regulated would be unfair for farmers compared with the areas where the pesticides are not controlled. The farmers in regulated areas would have less crop harvests to compete with farmers in other areas for the pests population would be increased and cause the decline in harvests.

In addition, the second solution proposed by the passage is to prevent infection from fungus which has deadly effect over frogs (the fungus causes thickening of frog skins cuasing difficulties for frogs to obsorb water and death of dehydration) and apply antifungal medication and treatments on a large scale. However the professor argues that the treatment of such method must be done individually on frogs which involves that capture and treatment for a single frog and it couldn't prevent the desease from passing to the offsprings. Therefore, this solution is undoubtably complicated and expensive.

Finally, the passage states the third solution is to protect the frogs living habitats from human activities which involves the excessive water use or draining of wetlands, making them unsuitable for frogs to live in. In contrast, the professor maintains that gloabal warming plays a bigger role in disturbing the frogs habitats other than the human activities alone. So by limiting the movements of human couldn't possibly solve this problem for the disappearance of water is mainly caused by global warming.



独立写作:
同不同意:Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.


正文:
It is no question that modern life is much more colorful than it was in the past, for instance, 100 years ago, where technologies were relatively less advanced and internet or cellphones had not even been thought of or imagined. With the rapid improvements brought by the development of modern technologies, people' lives become more entertaining, fascinating and diversified. However the drawbacks are also along the side with these major changes in people's lives. It is the characteristic of complex the modern life has that make its essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. I shall illustrate my point with the following reasons.

First of all, modern life has an assortment of ways for people to get entertained, or to be more specific, distracted, which noramlly result in procrastination in young people's daily life. Take myself as an example. Whenever I want to study for a long period of time, I could get distracted by various of things like the ringing of my iPhone, the notificaitons of an E-mail, or worse, the compulsive need for checking social updates on apps. This could be a nightmare for young people who want to focus on a certain project to fulfill requirements from teachers or schools. So we need to plan ahead to make sure everything is orgainzed and thus guarantee the concentration and efficiency over the things we need to be doing. A plan involving the absence of cellphones or internet would be perfect to acheive this goal.

In addition, making a specific plan ought to be and must be the foundamental ability for all young people to develop as a quality which would benefit them for the long term. A lot of students in the college are having prolems with their accademic assignments regarding this. Specifically, a student in the college has to deal with much more things in life than a student in high school. One has to consider future career, family and friends and the tasks needed to be done at hand and so much more. The complicated life factors sometimes would be barriers for students to achieve their personal goals. It is rather important for them to be well-planned and organized, to sort out all the things and put them in order and deal with them one by one. This would be even more critical when young people are at work. A good ability to plan and organize gives one absolute competitive quality in a working settings and allows one to avoid bad consequences caused by procrastination which normally involves the delay of an important task or messing up the whole project.

The way I see it, with or without the complex of modern life, young people should and must have the ability to plan and organize things. It is the increasing factors of distractions (frequent use of cellphones and social apps) in modern life for young people that makes this ability a much more important matter for young people to take care of and a must-have quality for acheiving their goals.



辛苦老师了。。。感谢。

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