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From the passageand Bill, we get two totally different views about buzzing.
Firstly, theliterature argues that the buzzing is a kind of advertising and it maymisleading consumers. Because buzzers might be paid to praise the products.However, Bill argues that the buzzers are the person who have used this kind ofproduct and they think the product is really good, and buzzing is notadvertising products but telling the truth feeling.
Secondly, thepassage argues that the buzzers just pretend as private individuals and hardlycritical the products than they suppose to. But Bill disagrees, he said thebuzzers are the real users of the products. They often talk their real feelingabout price, service and how long they have used the products because if theydid not answer these questions, the customers will probably not buy theproducts.
Thirdly, thepassage argues that buzzing is probably leave a bad influence on socialrelationships because people may thinks others are dishonest. However, Billsaid it is not real. He said the buzzed products promoted by the people whosatisfied, and  will probably win newcustomers' trust, these trust circle can be enlarged and leave a good influencein our social relationships.

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同学们好,如果需要我批改作文的,请直接在作文发帖区发帖,并在标题中指定由我批改。在我空间留言区粘贴是无效的。谢谢各位配合
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