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  Some people tend to make their decision fast, quickly. They do not
even take the twice thought. The risk taking for them is essential to
success. Other people apt to make their movement prudently in order to
keep everything is on the right track. To my opinion, it depends on the
situation.

  On the one hand, When I am facing a life-threatening event I will
not be audacious. Since I will be upset if I break my hand or any part
of my body. Take driving the car, for instance, there is research
divulge that the over speed responses for more than 60 percent of the
car accident. All of this can be avoided had the driver had tried to
slow down its car. Taking risk is the least thing to do when we are
driving.

   On the other hand, during the experiment in the laboratory. It is  the safety
that is the first priority. If there are mistakes in the operation procedure, the
odd of the explosion is extremely high. Take me, a chemistry majoring student, for example.
One night I overlooked the deviation value of the object that I was testing due to the desire
that I really wanted to go back to my dorm and sleep. I thought that is not a big deal.
So I took the risk. In the end, I had to take the responsibility of blowing almost half of my lab off.

   However, sometimes, risk taking and working quickly are the key to
success. Doing the preemptive movement can make us stand out. Again, take me, for instance,
wen there was a speech contest held by my high school. I could not hold my aspiration and
decide to sign up for myself right after the event was announced, even I did not know
whether I can make it or not. Thankfully with the hard work I had
taken, I won the contest and proved myself.

  There is no reason to choose whether it is risk taking or making the safe decision is the most pivotal.
Since that are the equally essential for being successful.

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