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Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific point made in the reading passage.
The professor casts doubt on the view that the story of the burning mirror is just a myth and such a device was never rally built.
First of all,it is ture that ancient Greeks were not technologically advanced enough to make a big mirror that was several meters wide,but they didn\\\'t need to build such a big one.They just needed dozens of  samll mirrors that had very precise parabolic curvature and put those mirrors together when they wanted to use.
What\\\'s more,soldiers didn\\\'t have to burn the wood which was time-consuming because there were other materials on the ships and some of the materials were easy to burn,such as pitch which can catch fire within seconds under the concentrated sun\\\'s ray.
Finally,although burning mirrors were not an improvement of flaming arrows,enemies were more familiar with flaming arrows and once the arrows come out,they would take actions to defend.When burning mirrors were used,enemies just saw mirrors and would not defend it unless the ships suddently catch fire.So burning mirrors were more effective than flaming arrows.



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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I partly agree with the statement that work only three days a week for long hours is more enjoyable.I will have more time to manage by myself and have higher work efficiency,but I think work three days a week might have some bad effect on my promotion.

First of all,I will have four unoccupied days each week,which means I can manage my time more free.For example,I can spend more time to company my families,such as playing with my children and chatting with my parents.Also,I will have enough time to take a long-term trip to other place of my beautiful country.But if I take a work that requires five days a week,I can only take a short-term trip to some place in or near the city I live in,which might be less enjoyable.Besides,I can take a part-time job or even another job requires only three days a week if I feel a little short and want to make more money.

What\\\'s more,if I work only three days a week for long hours,I have to focus myself on my job and achieve a high work efficiency because I need to finish more work every weekday.By contrast,if I work five days a week for shorter hours,I might feel relaxed with my job because I have more time to finish my works,so I will chat with my colleagues or take a nop at noon which will lead to a low work efficiency.In my opinion,I prefer a high work efficiency and focus on my work and complete it quickly to a low work efficiency and accomplish the same amount of work slowly.

However,working only three days a week do have some disadventages.For example,it will be difficult for me to get promotion because the time I spend with my colleagues will be shorter than the time that those who work five days a week spend with their colleagues.So some of the staffs and even leaders in the company might be unfamiliar with me and as a result,they won\\\'t vote for me when there is a promotion opportunity faces me.




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