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[老师已改] 求批改7test1 It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is widely accepted that some people have inborn talents, for instance for sports or music, but others do not. However, the public usually contend that every child can be educated to be a great sports person or musician. Personally, I prefer the latter.
There is a trend that certain talents are regarded as inborn gifts. Unfortunately, only several babies can owe them. For example, some children are more sensitive to music, and they are more likely to create wonderful compositions on early age(不知道这个用法对不对,要不要加s) , such as Mozart. And it is undeniable that there is only one Mozart in history(要加the吗),  and most ordinary people can not become excellent musicians and achieve huge success as Mozart did.
On the other hand, there is a claim that all the child can be taught to become experts, such as musicians and sports persons. For one thing, people who hold this view contend that endeavor and perseverance play major roles(可以加s吗) in the development of children .  Countless athletes, for example, take great efforts to practice and finally win the Olympic Games. For another, as time goes by, the inborn difference will lessen or even disappear. With adequate training and practice, normal persons also can become masters.
As far as I am concerned, though everyone is born with some talents, but is can not (cannot还是can not好呢) prevent people from success. Because most of individuals  are average persons, without natural gift(gift后面要加s吗) . What they can do is to take all efforts to improve abilities and perfect skills to achieve their unique achievement. Chengfei, a famous Chinses gymnast, for example, without great sports talent, wined many champions in tournaments and competitions, as a result of countless failures and tremendous practice.
In addition, only several fortunate babies are born with certain talents, but no one could blame their failure for the lack of talents.
Because success largely relies on efforts and perseverance.  



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