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5test1  The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The graph presents the percentage of peopleage 65 and over in three major countries, from 1940 to 2040.
Japan will reach its highest proportion ofelderly people in 2040, nearly 27%, sharply increasing from 10% in 2030. Similarly,USA and Sweden also are predicted to have dramatic increase in 2040,up to 23%and up to(可以省略吗) 25% respectively.
However, from 1940 to 2030, these countrieshave witnessed different(不知道时态对不对) trends. During the period between 1940 to1980, the proportion of the old decreased about 2%, while a rise of approximately 6%(可以这样写吗)in USA and an increase of around 7% in Sweden.In the following 50 years in Japan, the percentage of over-65 age grouptriples, from 3% in 1980 to 10% in 2030, compared with several fluctuations inUSA and Sweden.
Overall, in 2040, Japan will have highestproportion of the old, increasing sharply from 2030. In contrast, despite some drops, the number of elderly people inSweden and USA steadily grow.  

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