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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be acompulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity,improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Unpaid community service sometimes is advocated for becoming acompulsory part of the programs in high school. Although it has downsides, I arguethat it is of great value for students.
By providing community service, students can improve their skillsand increase their practical experience, which have a positive influence intheir high school life. For example, when raising money for charities, theywould figure out how to communicate with benefactors and work closely withothers. Consequently, students tend to show good manners to their classmatesand interact appropriately with friends. Besides, these activities can boosttheir confidence and improve their problem-solving ability.
Meanwhile, teenagers can learn responsibility in serving the community,which stimulates them perform better in school. For one thing, they willcherish their opportunities of education. For example, when supportingdisadvantaged children from deprived families in schooling, students wouldrealize how fortunate they are and that could motivate them to work harder. Foranother, it is the sense of responsibility that leads to sense of belonging. Ifthey see how their work can make a positive difference to other members of thecommunity, they are more likely to make contribution to their schoolsenthusiastically.
On the other hand, we cannot ignore the possibility that unpaid workis likely to lead to a wasteful use of volunteers’ time, if not well-organized,which would disrupt their study. What’s more, they might gradually get used tosocial work and are reluctant to come back to school.

Overall, although community service has its negative influence, I considerit as a compulsory part of high school programs.

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