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求批改 老师挺急的 谢谢了10test1小作文 The first chart below shows how energy is used in an ave

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The first chart below shows how energy isused in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhousegas emissions which result from this energy use.

老师,题目中的greenhouse gas emissions可以简写成greenhouse gas或者greenhouse emissions吗?总感觉emissiongas重复了。。。。。
The charts present the difference use of household energy and thegreenhouse gas emissions from different energy.
Heating is the most important energy in Australia, taking up 42% ofall energy used. And it produces about 15% greenhouse gas emissions. In contrast,most gas emissions result from water heating, with 32%, which takes up 30% ofall energy.
Other appliances is another major energy use, 15%, which is the halfof the percentage of the use of water heating. It produces 28% greenhouse gasemissions. This number is twice as the amount of emissions from refrigeration(ok吗).Cooling andlighting are least significant energy, 2% and 4% respectively. Cooling produces3% of total emissions while lighting takes up 8%. The percentage of energy usedfor refrigeration is 7%, and the amount of its gas emissions doubles.
Overall, heating and water heating are major energy in Australia whilewater heating and other appliances produce most greenhouse gas emission.

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