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The table decribes the amount of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after refurbishment and the pie chart reveals the satisfication degree of visitors in two same periods .
According to the table, the amount of visitor has a upward tendency, increased by 28,000 in the total number which was just 74,000 visitors during the year before refurbishment.
when it comes to the pie chart, it is clear that visitors are more satisfied to the Museum overall. More specifically, the popularity of visitor who feeled very satisfied climbs to 35% after the refurbishment from 15% before. visitors, meanwhile, feeled dissatisfied had a fall from 40% to 15%, while the number of satisfied visitor had a slight increase from 30% to 40%. Besides, the amount of  visitors who very dissatisfied for the Museum halve the number from 10%.
To sum up, refurbishment had reached the expectation and it contributed to the higher satisfication degree and appealed more visitors.

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