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Many governmentthinks that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for acountry.

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There is a generaldiscussion in recent years about what is a country's most important goal. Somegovernment say that economic progress should be the most important goal, whileother people argue that other types of progress are also important. People arguewith each other, because they see things from different point of view.

On the one hand,economic progress bring most advantages to people. At first, people can takelong-distant travel, even travel to other countries, which will broaden theirview and help them to deal with their stress of work. Also, along with thedevelopment of economy, government can put more money to healthcare service.This  will improve people's livingstandard, develop people's sense of pride in their country and increasepeople's loyalty to the country. Moreover, the development of economy canpromote the development of technology, which will reinforce our country'smilitary. As a result, our country's international status can be enhanced.


On the other hand,other types of progress is also important, such as  education. Thistype of education can help people to develop good behavior, improve theircultivation and  morality. People with those characters can reduce the rate of crime, provide a friendly growth environment to children and even gain esteem from other country's people. As a result, this can boost our country's image, even the influence of our country.

From what has beendiscussed above, in my opinion, although economic progress is important and canbring us many profits, the importance of other types of progress can not beignored.






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