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title: some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Arrangements of universities’ courses are very complicated for each university. Courses which students like should be arranged for students only from some persons’ views. Contrarily, courses which is useful in future should be arranged for students only, which some person considered. Considering the time side and the resources of work in university, university should set courses that depend on the principle of “be useful in future”.

Considered time of students, every person only have limited time in days and in their life. They could not learn all courses what they want in their willing time. And each course or class have only one teacher. Their time are limited too. Then, a conclusion will be showed out that the limited time between teachers and students could not allow all of the student to study whatever they want.

Then universities always control massive resources. It means that they can use these resources to university do the investment and investigation in labor market. Then use these information to set courses that make students have jobs or career planning when they graduate. This advantage of university does not exist in students’ advantage.

The time limitation between students and teachers, and the advantage of university in resource showed a conclusion that students should follow instructions of university to study courses that will be useful.


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