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发表于 2017-3-16 17:32 |显示全部楼层
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【Some people believe that it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places with high proportion to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?】

With the importance of education being aware greatly, many hotly-debated issues have arisen in education, one of which is whether a country should provide university places with high proportion to young people. Some people embrace this opinion, which, however, sounds questionable.

Admittedly, giving more opportunities to young people do generate advantages. In this case, a country would gain a higher rate of college enrollment. Besides, young adults get access to higher education easily, which seems like a great improvement of educational development.

Another army of people including me, however, regard it is neither possible nor useful. Obviously, setting a fair standard to filter is an effective way of maintain the quality of university students. As the mission of cultivating high-quality students, university must insist on their entrance requirements, otherwise not only would students fail to catch up the pace, but university also lose their reputation of excellent graduates. In addition, if the proportion of entering university is high, young people in middle school would easily lose their pressure and motivation of fighting for their dream school, which will depress the academic environment and in essence have bad effect on education. What’s more, it does not have to rely on the university to complete the young’s lives. Restrict entrance rate will push them to look for more possibilities of their future for those who are not proper for university education.

Based on the above-mentioned points, I hold the view that a country is not supposed to provide university places with high proportion to the young. It is giving more excellent resources that counts, instead of lowering the standard of entrance requirement.


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发表于 2017-4-2 14:34 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2018-4-1 11:33 |显示全部楼层
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