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2017年4月29日 雅思写作考题A类回忆
  
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题目
The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown in 1700  and 2000.

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范文
The modification for a town, Bridgetown, during the period of 1700 to 2000 is  clearly illustrated in the given maps.
  
Before reconstruction,the town was divided into two parts by a river. A bridge across  the river connected the roads in the northwest and southeast. In the  northwestern part of the town,a large piece of land  was occupied by some woods,with a market place  located inside and a castle situated to the north,while  on the other side of the river,the land was mainly  used for farming.
  
By the year of 2000,great changes have taken place in this town. To be more specific,a railway line was newly built adjacent to the bridge and a bypass  was extended from the roads for better transport. The former castle was  replaced by a school and similarly,the farmland in  the southwest of the town was reconstructed into a build-up area.
  
Overall,the layout of the  town remained unchanged but some newly-constructed facilities ornamented this  area and made it more modern.
  
(181 words)范文来自小站黄天枝老师
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题目
  
  
Children today find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in  schools.
  
Why do you think causes this problem?
  
What do we need to do to solve this problem?
范文
It is not uncommon  to hear the complaint that children nowadays are easily distracted from what  they are supposed to do in class. The factors responsible for this problem  and feasible solutions accordingly will be analyzed in this report.
  
Among all the  possible reasons,the excessive  application of electronic products in school should bear the blame. Children  born and raised in this digital age have been accustomed to keeping in touch  with the outside world through their smart phones or iPad. As a result,various social media and mobile game APPs bring the world closer  to them but dampen their enthusiasm on absorbing knowledge and skills.
  
To expand their  attention span in class and solve this problem,there are some measures that need to be taken into consideration.  It is advisable for teachers,who usually function as  the monitors and managers of the class,to set rules  about phone using. For example,anyone caught using  electronic products for non-academic purposes more than three times will be  given an “F”in the final  exam. This can bring an immediate and tangible outcome within a short time.
  
In addition,distracting students from screens back to the  whiteboard is also a way worth trying. Some activities designed for raising  energy level of students so as to get them better involved in class can be  applied wisely,like role-play,mingling,seminar etc. These kind of  activities convert the traditionally teacher-centered teaching pattern into  the student-centered one and consequently compete with phones for student’s  interest and attention.
  
In conclusion,the abuse of electronic products in the classroom is  the root cause of students' attention issues and the responsibility of  sparing students from this problem falls on teachers.
  
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