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发表于 2017-8-10 20:38 |显示全部楼层
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   Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement:
   Themost important thing that government can do to improve health care is to cleanthe environment.
Nowadays the civilian health is beingdeteriorated, the issue about how to improve people's health care is beingargued. Some people asserts that the best method is to clean the environment,whereas others disagree with this idea. In my opinion, I agree that the mostimportant thing the government can do is to clean the environment.
First, recently, the most important factor that cause people's healthdecline is air pollution. According to a recent survey reported by China Daily,more than 70 percent of Chinese people's fitness issues are related with airpollution. For example, I have a relative, he lives in Liao Ning province allhis life and he has a hobby that jogging in the morning everyday regardless thequality of the air is good or not. But the problem is that Liao Ning is one ofthe provinces that the quality of air is the worst is China. My relative keepsjogging ten years and recently he was diagnosed that he got benign cancer ofhis lung. After an entire array of survey, the doctor found that the main causeof his cancer is the air pollution. Because air pollution is one of the most importantenvironmental issues and leads to cancer of lung, I believe the most importantthing the government should do to improve people's health care is to clean theenvironment.
Furthermore, good environment will be incentive which can foster peopleto do some exercises that are beneficial for their health. According to areport issued by China Daily, people who live in places which have gorgeousenvironment are more willing to do exercises to improve their health. Forexample, I have a cousin, Mike, he lives in Hainan province, a city which doesnot have manufacturing and has very beautiful environment. All of his friendsincluding him like outdoor activities such as climbing, so their physical andemotional health are better than others. Because gorgeous environment canfoster people to do exercises to improve their health, I believe governmentshould clean the environment to improve people's health.
Although there are other ways to improve people's health like increasingthe investment of fundamental facilities which are relevant with people'shealth, yet I still believe the best way is to clean the environment becauseother ways can not uproot the health problems radically. In conclusion, Ibelieve the most important thing the government can do to improve health careis cleaning the environment.
  Tosum up, I believe the best way the government can do to improve health care isto clean the environment because environment problems are the main reason thatcause people's fitness deteriorating, the gorgeous environment can also fosterpeople to exercise to improve their health.

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