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Some peoplebenefit from modern communication technology, but some groups of people don’t.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Communication is one of basic demand in our daily life and the way people talk with eachother has been changed by the developing technology. I agree with the viewcompletely that widely although modern communication approaches are used nowadays, there are minority groups not benefited from these.


For most individuals, advanced communicating technology is helpful. One typical example is long-distance couples. Social applications like Facebook which have functions like chatting in video realize date online as long as they wish, asif they never separated. This method also applies to the students who studyabroad and really miss their families. Another instance is the one who is in danger. If somebody is caught in a fire, he or she can call the police immediately. That means it is more likely to survive. On the contrary, if there is not any phone in the reaching range, it is difficult to seek help.


However,there are indeed a small group of people who do not benefit from the technology. Blind people are one part of them. Since their physical defect, it is hard for them to use the social devices such as smartphone like the sighted, let alone social applications. Simultaneously, senior citizens are another unbenefited group because it is usually hard for them to learn how to use smartphone. It usually takes a long haul for them to get used to the devices and most of themgive up.


In conclusion, although modern communication technology makes innovation in our daily life, they are not suitable to everyone. There must be more improvements for the blind and the erlderly.

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